Over at Poets United, Kim's prompt left me with a swirl of thoughts a poem expressing ourselves, our place in the universe.
"The universe is not really made up of atoms, it's made up of stories. It is through the sharing of our unique stories that we can arrive at a deeper connection with another person. I also may come to a deeper connection with myself, with my own truth -- by exploring that edge of authenticity." ~ Muriel Rukeyser
Kim's prompt: We see the world in our own special way and perceive experiences differently than anyone else. Use YOUR unique voice. Share a poem about your place, role, mission, position in the world, in the universe. Explore the edge of your authenticity. Use YOUR unique voice. Share a poem about your place, role, mission, position in the world, in the universe. Explore the edge of your authenticity.
"The universe is not really made up of atoms, it's made up of stories. It is through the sharing of our unique stories that we can arrive at a deeper connection with another person. I also may come to a deeper connection with myself, with my own truth -- by exploring that edge of authenticity." ~ Muriel Rukeyser
Kim's prompt: We see the world in our own special way and perceive experiences differently than anyone else. Use YOUR unique voice. Share a poem about your place, role, mission, position in the world, in the universe. Explore the edge of your authenticity. Use YOUR unique voice. Share a poem about your place, role, mission, position in the world, in the universe. Explore the edge of your authenticity.
Edge, did she say edge...lol. Well, of course I have to try to share my view.
Fingerprinted thoughts appear in inky ripples
on my morning pages
on my morning pages
as my green cup lifts me from ghost moth dreams
I look for my
I look for my
liquid sunshine
moving me to find day's gold
Steeped memories
clear and cloud my gray mattered sieve
in a bird's song, the wind's roar as it dances
with the trees and
flowers waltz to nature's symphony
with the trees and
flowers waltz to nature's symphony
I see wonder in wings
the blue kiss of water touching Earth's green
the honey of day illuminates my path
later the moon paints an indigo canvas with a winking sky
rambling thoughts of lost dreams and maybe ifs
as owls hoot at midnight setting me off
to the Land of Nod
I see a family parade in my children
stars in their eyes
hope in their fingers
My secret
come close
I'll tell you:
Be authentic, be you
follow the voice of your heart
wink back at the Moon
and wave to the Sun
try to be kind, even to those who hurt you.
Life is a gift....
© Ellen Wilson
Comments
Wow, kiddo. Fantastic.
This was one of my favorite lines: later the moon paints an indigo canvas with a winking sky
rambling thoughts of lost dreams and maybe ifs
Excellent job on this. Thanks for the lift!
Wonderfully elucidated.
Gracias Ella
even to those
who hurt you.
Life is a gift...
This is a classic ending Ella! It'll boost good human relations and good neighborliness within the community if everyone reacts positively! Nicely!
Hank
the honey of day illuminates my path"...and your ending sums up a wonderful way to live!
addition to a creative aspect.
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Stephen-Well said :D Thank you!
I so agree~
LG-Those dreams are full of ghost moths, ;D Thank you~ :D @>----
Helen-Yes, and let's hope the wave n' wink back ;D lol
Poet Laundry-Thank you! I kinda wanted to do it different, but went with it! ;D @>------
Sun really does brighten so much our world,our mood!
L.Diane-Yes and when we take photos we try to capture it, chase it even ;D Thank you~ @>----------
Hank-Thank you! We have to look hard sometimes, but those who lash out are usually hurting more than we know~
Hugs and chocolate,
Shelly
Shelly-lol YOU are fun! Thank you and yes, we need more hugs n' chocolate ;D
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