Thought I would test the waters and try something new. A poem using a fortune from a cookie. I love the one in my photo, but my fortune cookie said, "Adventure can be real happiness". So I thought I would add this to another challenge to write a poem using this photo.
I am combining the two; yeah unique challenge!
I am combining the two; yeah unique challenge!
Leap, plunge forward
Did you pass go?
Or is it Jail for you?
Propel your thoughts, assimilate your dreams
your GPS is recalculating
Gifts, passion and spirit
Calling you to open you wings
wings with amazing grace
wings with amazing grace
Over the horizon is your dream
Waiting for you to run, fly, hike, bike, walk towards it
Waiting for you to run, fly, hike, bike, walk towards it
Only you can detect your flight plan
Sometimes we get grounded by gray geese, rain or snow
tick tock, don’t stay for long
if stagnant, mold will attach
eyes will fade
vision won't be as shiny
patina will grow
if stagnant, mold will attach
eyes will fade
vision won't be as shiny
patina will grow
Move
detours can alter you
"Adventure can be real happiness"
It is all about the journey
Your frequent flyer miles are waiting to be redeemed
your faith is calling
Leap and find YOU~
I'm tired so I may have to re do this one, later~
I'm tired so I may have to re do this one, later~
Comments
"Calling you to open you wings
wings with amazing grace"
http://rosalindadam.blogspot.com
'Propel your thoughts, assimilate your dreams'
Ellie Garratt
I very often write poems to song titles that I see. I don't copy what the song is about but put my own stamp on the title.
Quite interesting to do.
Have a good day.
Yvonne.
I like the spirit and the message of your poem.
Lee
Tossing It Out
I don't think you need to re-work anything, it's great just as it is.
Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/07/28/grass/
Lynette-I love your view; it is beautiful! Thank you so much for you kind words, but more for sharing your view! Stunning :D
jgr-Thank you for stopping by and your kind words~
Daydreamertoo-Thank you; It is funny how we write something and want to do something more with it~
Lee-Your look is fine; look at something else differently! Perhaps an adventure you were considering...look at that idea again~
Sherry-I think most can relate to questioning what now, which path do I take?! My husband's world has detoured my journey; my choice now~
Thank you :D
Scarlett-Funny, I find that happening a lot lately to me. Think of something, then the next blog I read, is on the same wave length!
Thank you so much :D
Thank you Jack, so much. I will be by soon to see what you have written :D
Septembermom-Thank you; yes the cookie fortune aligned~ ;D
Shelly-You are so kind~ Thank you!
Hi Kerry-Yes, they are! Thank you, it wasn't planned, but then I found the fortune and thought I could combine both prompts~
Leigh-Thank you; thrust is good ;D
Now, I need to practice it more in my world~
Thank you Donna; It took me a while to find the fortune~
Wanda-I can relate; it is difficult!
I think listening to our soul helps. I think morning pages help, too~xXx
Yvonne-Thank you so much; I love your idea! I should have known ;D I know how much you love music!
Alex-Yes, I will take them ;D
Thanks!
Ellie-Thank you! A skyward journey would appeal to you :D
Tammy-Thank you so much; I will come visit you soon! You are so sweet~
Roaslind-I think we all need a break, detour sometimes! Thank you~
Madeleine-Thank you; yes it was~ :D
Lynda-So glad you like that line; I tested my wings with this poem! Thank you!
There are several places where I wanted to mention that my fortune cookie/tea leaf little 'poem' is an answer to the challenge, by you, and answered here by you. It was included as one of three choices in Margaret's "Play it Again" challenge for this Friday.
The fortune cookie picture (you liked it) was yours from that challenge in the Toads, one July 20, 2011. THANK YOU.
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p.s. I hope you are feeling better now.
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