I wanted to give Red another try. This is also for Imaginary Garden's challenge,to write a poem
based on Little Red Riding Hood.
Innocent outlines flushed red cheeks
breath crystallizes in air
pine needle carpet crunches
with permafrost
onward I go
birds whisper"feaRED wolf
I scurry along,
twigs snap in deep forest
cold air seeps
into my bones
a trail of breadcrumbs
slowly disappears
birds sing their final evening song
yet mocking bird continues
mimics many tongues
lazy sun descends
ribbons of crimson and blood orange spread out
outlining the view
to Grandmother’s house
I hear the stream, I'm close by
Fear washed away
Moon’s logic is rising
I feel sharp eyes watching me
I dart bird like
must hurry
Streaks of darkness blur
my view
Flinching I turn
Nothing there
Amber moon glows
in midnight's theater
Luna's labor a rim of fire
ignites a
Wolf’s revenge
©
Ellen Wilson
Comments
The imagery is super strong in this one, so many powerful phrases...it really sheds new light on the old fairy tale, and I like new takes on old versions of things a lot.
~Scarlett
Yvonne.
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Thanks for sharing.
Lisa-I have a head cold, too! Hope you feel better~ Thanks for telling me; I'm glad you like them~
Leigh-I agree the movie disappointed me, too. It had a magical quality in the setting, mood. Thank you~
Lolamouse-really I gave you chills?
Thanks for sharing :D
Tina-I wish it was my photo, but it was part of the prompt, it is stunning!
Susan-Thank you, yes the wide eyed innocence was the hook. lol
Hi Septembermom-I will be by to see what you have been up to! Thank you~
Ed-Thank you! I still would like to work on it, maybe go further onto a another trail. :D
Sherry-I will stop by and see if the Wolf visited you, too~
Georgie-You are talented, too ;D
I will be by~
Thank you Other Mary, I thought it sounded magical~
Thank you Dezmond! I love movies, but this one, was so-so~
Hilary-Glad you liked it! It is that time of year ;D
Thank you Wendy!
Melissa-really...Thank you! I just might give a try; thanks so much~
Stephen-Yes, damn those mockingbirds! Isn't there a song about them... ;D I love your take on their persona~
Kim-mmh, I will have to play with that thought! Thank you~
Yvonne-Thank you, I will be by to see what has been inspiring you!
Mary-Thank you, the "red" prompt did provide some intriguing thoughts~
Mystic Mom-Thank you, I had fun writing it!
Scarlett-I also love alternate view on those fairy tales. Thank you~