Over in the Imaginary Garden, Kenia gave us an assignment to write a poet, on a poet we didn't embrace. She asked us to use a line in one of their poems that attracted our attention, drew our respect.
Mary gave us an assignment to write a poem about the two sided coin. The view of two points of view. I decided, to combine both. For Kenia's challenge, I used Turkish Poet, Oktay Rifat's poem THE WIFE.
This is what I selected that spoke to me:
Mary gave us an assignment to write a poem about the two sided coin. The view of two points of view. I decided, to combine both. For Kenia's challenge, I used Turkish Poet, Oktay Rifat's poem THE WIFE.
This is what I selected that spoke to me:
We are halves of the same apple
Our day and night, our homes, are one. ~ Oktay Rifat
Story of the applesby ~mahirates
Myddle Earth
Yes, my word my middle, lol
Humanity
blurred
two souls united
one knows death, the fractures the detour the destined road
she knows disease and the beauty n' despair of its voice
he knows clean, toss and throw
severe lessons if goals not carried out
he knows abuse
she knows creative
she knows how time changes goals
how death creates an unique view
how disease like a volcano
erupts and creates another path
he knows a different volcano
piles
disturb your process and make mine dance
I want to
enjoy my time alive
I know the
dance of death
you know the
dance of everything in its place
I see the
bigger view
you see the
crumbs on the floor the
fingerprints
on the stainless steel
I see the
beauty calling me to go outside
We are halves of the same apple
Our day and night, our homes, are one.
Our day and night, our homes, are one.
you are tart, tougher skin
I'm maybe too sweet, to likely to give in
I like calm, happy
you like order
you see the
leaf indoors, the cobwebs on the umbrella tree
I see the
inspiration in my head
you see the
mess
you want
tidy
I want to be
Miss Muffet
I see beauty
in motes, paint chips
and dried
herbs
you see work
your perfume
is Windex
blue
your white
gloves
distract my
dance of inspired
if you don't
leave me bee
I might just Windex you!
You view
clouds mine
you block my
sun, sometimes
you swipe
the dust motes dancing in the sun
I embrace
them, collect their memories,
cat n' nine tails fluff
you curse it
I take photos of it's charm
You want it
clean
I want time
You want everything in it's place
I want you
to build me shelves
for this place
organize my
creations
You think I collect too much
I think your view too narrow
I think
you waste time on clean
I want to
dance in the moonlight
and enjoy
the magic a day brings
you want to Endust it all
You need Glinda's bubble
enjoy your view
I want my bubble to burst and run free
embrace the outdoors, the fresh, the ripeness
I want to enjoy the world
I'm trying meet you in the myddle
clean till I
think my fingerprinted soul is lost
my
time is not mine
someone always says they will do and then
they leave
I hold the bag, the dust pan and the flour
measured moments lost
clean till I
can't smell anything but fumes
lost dreams
what I am suppose to be...
lost in the
vapors of your wishes, your life
where is the
happy road of me
stuck in the myddle
* My husband and I trying to clean is like meeting in a busy intersection. We are still working on some home improvement projects, so I went in this direction. He grew up with everything in it's place. I grew up with my Dad dying. Both parents being creative and encouraging me to be. Our home was clean, but not exactly everything in its place.
"Life is too short to smell like Windex." ~Ellen Wilson
Comments
But, if someone uses something of mine, I like it put back where it came from then I know where it is and can find it. Chloe drives me crazy. She takes things and then you can never find them again and I mean, never, because she never remembers where she puts things at all.
keep on keeping on and meet in the myddle of the muddle Ella :)
Bren-I like picked up, but I also like time to create. There has to be a middle in the muddle, lol I love that Bren~ I'm fighting for myddle :D
My husband doesn't care if anything is ever tidied up around here. He doesn't care if anything is improved. He took years to fix the roof until I told him the ceiling would fall on his head from the weight of the water.
On the other hand, my first husband used to follow me around with the vacuum cleaner, he was such a neat freak.
I think people ought to sign a who-cleans-what agreement before they marry, so wives aren't always cleaning up someone else's mess.
K
Although I am fortunate that my wife and I like the same level of cleanliness.
"you swipe the dust motes dancing in the sun
I embrace them, collect their memories,"
Is just one instance of magic from this!!
Warm smiles to you, Ella!!
My dream is to earn enough at writing to afford a cleaning service. lol
Laurie-Nice! :D lol
Carrie-Why is that?! I wonder...
Hope all is well with you! Thank you, I hope everyone is doing well. JD can be so difficult~ Thank you, you are sweet! I'll be by soon! :D I think of you, too and think I must visit Carrie more often!
Sherry-I'm afraid if I slow down, I'll rust, lol Thank you! ;D It is a tightrope act. I know I'm not alone trying to balance, the have to with the want to.
MPax-I love your dream, lol! I'd be afraid I would clean before they came, lol I do love the idea though~ Thank you! Next time I wish on a star, I will think of you~
Hannah-Thank you! Warm smiles back at you :D I can't wait to see what you have been up to! You have to do a book ;D
Angela-Thank you! Yes, I was pretty excited when I found it~ :D
Mary-Thank you! It was a great prompt~ I can't wait to read everyone's. I know, it is different, when it is the man. His Mom was over the top, to me. I want to have my kids remember me being playful and fun, not dusting and cleaning the floor. They do see both. I grew up seeing my family was the middle. My Uncle's wife, never did anything, but clean. It was crazy clean at her home. I didn't even want to sit down. I like myddle ;D
Peggy-Yes, I know! He thinks I'm too lax. I do think opposites attract, a lot! ;D
Door bell..i'll be back
I know I love those shoes, too~ :D
Liza-You are so right! ;D I love this line~
Alex-I am happy for you! It does help to have share a similar vision~ :D
Kay-Yes, wouldn't that be nice! I get left holding the chore bag more than my fair share. Where is the middle? ;D
Teresa-Thank you! Yes, it does have a lot to do with how you were raised~ I'm worried now about my kids...yikes. lol
Judy-It is true, time resets the compass and turns our journey onto another path. We have two GPS, one is for us.
GPS-Gifts, Passion, Spirit~
Thank you :D