Small Copper
© John Edwards
© John Edwards
Thank you Kerry n' John~
In a pasture of delicious yellow
Small Copper dances
among a coverlet of Oxy-eye-daisies and Devil's Nettle
enjoying her fragrant morning tea
leaves turning yellow with veins of bronze n' gold
their edges curl among the faded buttercups
sounds start to stir on the forest floor
the scent of green
moss n' pine
light shadows dance
like a puddle
of watercolors
blending and pooling
as the orange glow rises over
horizon's altar
old trees sigh as the morning
hymn is sung
Infusing spirit
of the divine
offerings of silver light are made
Question Mark appears...
service begins
she folds her wings
and
prays
In the garden, Mary gave us a prompt: Neighborhood. Being a military spouse, I have lived in many neighborhoods, at least seventeen. I had to go with my childhood one, it is my favorite. It is where I lived the longest~ I have written many times about my home...this one is a bit different ;D
Sky's bounty kisses the breezy blue sea
along small coastal town where
white washed picket fences outline
the boundaries of old colonial charm
Sea captains homes stand tall and proud
on outskirts of town
My street was white washed and proud
only two houses changed their coats
to yellow and blue.
Pots of red trailing geraniums outline the street
my yard had the tallest Maple trees
my home was
the hang house.
Baseball, bikes and playing store
was what we did
when we weren't at the shore
a treasure map of dotted sea glass n' drift wood
n' sanddollars
Finding baby crabs in tidal pools
always racing to the shore
to the edge of the wharf
Neighbors like anywhere
one vacuumed his lawn, everything neat as a pin
a few elderly gossip ganders always
in the know
a solitary man that gave out money on Halloween
A few teachers that gave out lessons
whenever we knocked on their doors
I rode my bike, walked dogs,
walked uptown to library, mail, store
always on the go
knocked on doors to sell
Girl Scout cookies,
collect $ for cancer
and collect items for Sunshine baskets
My children call my childhood home, their home
where we embraced the magic of the sea
swung on the porch glider, chased lightening bugs
went to the shore at least twice a day(even when it snowed)
and always having a tea party
Barbie Tea, dog bone tea, Nannie Nonnie tea,
Tea n' the sea
=EE
Comments
My favorite phrase in the garden poem is this: "as the orange glow rises over/horizon's altar/old trees sigh as the morning/hymn is sung"
That is so beautiful.
Sigh.......I always so enjoy when you write about your childhood memories...
Hank
and the second is so inviting!
Love them both!
♥
I love this:
"old trees sigh as the morning
hymn is sung
Infusing spirit
of the divine
offerings of silver light"
Thank you too for your sweet comment last week - I've just returned from vacation, so sorry it has taken me so long to respond! xoox
light shadows dance
like a puddle
of watercolors
blending and pooling
Thanks for sharing! Love the pix~ <3
Nutschell
www.thewritingnut.com
Thank you....how are you OO!
I will be by more often...I love your wisdom~
Nutschell-How are you? I stopped by the other day, but had trouble commenting. I will try again...
Thank you...I can only take credit for one photo :D
Leigh-Thank you! I will come see how your journey is going. I know you are busy! <3 555
Kristin-Welcome back :D
Thank you! I hope your get away was wonderful~
Flipside records-You are too kind~
I wish for a sunny disposition~ I have an artist's personality. When I create I'm sunny, when I'm unsure I'm a bit blue~ Thank you so much! :D
Sunny-How are you? I'll be by...I am so behind visiting. Summer has been crazy, this year! I hope you are doing well! Thank you :D
Dani-Thank you! I hope you will stop by PUnited tomorrow...it will be a surprising challenge. I think it will inspire a lot of different poems! I hope you will join in ;D
Mama Zen-Thank you! Funny how ideas just fall into one's lap. This is how that came about, okay sort of ;D
Hank-Thank you! Yes, I do think we poets see beyond the ordinary! ;D
I loved your interview,you have a wonderful family!
Mary Ann-Yes, it was quite colorful! lol Thank you so much~
I loved the art you shared :D
Alex-Thank you ;D I wish I had a few of yours, wise Ninja~
MPax-I am so happy to hear my words gave you a wonderful memory~
I loved playing store! I had to do something. In my neighborhood,there were a lot of boys. The only two girls other than myself were tomboys. I was an entrepreneur. I made fudge, cupcakes, popcorn and mini sandwiches. I even sold baseball cards, lol Then everyone wanted to help me at my store. Each week I had a different employee! ;D
Sherry-I think I could just write a book about the shore, lol It is still my favorite place on the planet, so far ;D There is no place like home! Thank you so much
Grace-Thank you! I enjoyed revisiting my memories~ The butterfly photo really was a great prompt for poetry ;D
Kerry-Thank you! I love butterflies and their symbolism!
I know they say home is where we hang our hat, but for me it is where my heart remembers and still resides~
Susan-Thank you so much! :D
Marian-lol, You made me smile...
I don't know about that, lol
Thank you!
PattiKen-Thank you so much! :D
My childhood was unique between the shore and a movie theater.
Susie-Thank you! Yes, I lived near uptown we called it, lol We lived close to a huge town wharf(not that photo). It was magical, to me :D
Shay-Thank you! It was fun to play with the image! Yes, the photo is on a other side of the wharf. It is a private beach, which the locals think is theirs when the summer people leave. ;D No one should own the beach...
Mary-Thank you! They both were fortunate to start school, where I went and grew up. We were lucky and I feel blessed they could be part of the magic and also call it home! Thank you for the prompt :D
Elizabeth
When I found the Question Mark one was when I decided to go on this path~ Thanks for sharing your gorgeous images with us~ :D
Elizabeth-Thank you! :D I will visit you more often~ You always inspire!