I was shopping yesterday and saw a lot of pastel polka dots of color, Velvet stuffed bunnies, chocolate eggs and daffodil. These all made me smile, yet I found myself leaning towards the nautical display. This one turquoise vase spoke to me. It replicated the milk frosted look of sea glass. I wanted it, but I didn't like the sticker shock, and placed it back on the shelf. I don't think it was so much the vase I wanted, but the seashore. I miss the salty sea air, the gulls soaring and the sunlight patting my head. I love a gusty kite breeze and the magic of the sun winking on the glistening shore. I love how the light plays and shadows inspire memories. The shore and blueberries remind me of home. After all, I am from the blueberry state. My days were spent at the shore. The shore and blueberries are big parts of my childhood. I ate blueberries every week and visited my shore every day. My brother and I would pick enough berries in the summer, so we could eat berries year round. Blue skies, the sea, and the taste of blue, all comfort n' transport me.
Margaret's daughter, Chelsea inspired us to write a poem about the African Mythological Goddess, Yemaya Oshun. Grace asked us to write a poem using cooking terms, a Poets in the Kitchen prompt, with 14 lines. I decided to blur the lines and attempt their challenges as one.
1) Oshun was an African Mythological Queen of great beauty, sweetness, and lively nature and daughter to Yemaya, the goddess of all waters.
2) Yemaya Oshun is one persona depicting all described.
3) Oshun is Mother of the African sweet or fresh waters and her mother, Yemaya, is mother of the salt waters.
Mouth watering blue melts
its silken scarf billows along life's rambled trails
salting earth in brackish pooling thoughts
soft and tender meringue peaks
as gulls' shrill laughter rings
black-blue hearts cracked and opened
hinged memories flood me
I see blue threads cascade
I see blue threads cascade
sweet whispers scent the air
I surrender to the Blue Danube it dances n' drapes
measured mood in blue notes
I stir Saffron sun's noodles
into dark blue brine
mysteries ladled inland.
measured mood in blue notes
I stir Saffron sun's noodles
into dark blue brine
mysteries ladled inland.
© Ellen Wilson
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Well done :)
I hope happy memories are attached~
The last three lines, in particular, made me want to fill a bowl with sun drop noodle soup and blue broth, picked right out of the sea at sunset.
Gobsmacked by the imagery of these verses!
I stir Saffron sun's noodles
into dark blue brine
mysteries ladled inland
Thanks for sharing your lovely work ~
Have a wonderful day ~
And I like everything blue. Was in New York having lunch years ago when someone suggested real blueberry for dessert. It's been blueberry cakes ever since whenever there is one available. This is the craving for missing the real thing! Nicely Ella!
Hank
salting earth in brackish pooling thoughts
soft and tender meringue peaks"
The imagery and desire for place is certainly at its best here! Beautiful.
Can you please link to my challenge site so Chelsea can easily read them all in one place? Thanks! :)
'I see blue threads cascade
sweet whispers scent the air'
Beautiful!
This line in particular spoke to me: "I miss the salty sea air, the gulls soaring and the sunlight patting my head."
I miss those things, too, every day.
K
Note: Lex and I were at a seminar with gourmet cooking. Dessert was everything from choc. cheesecake to bonbons... but the best was fresh black raspberries dredged in pure cocoa powder. First, the bitter chocolate, then SQUISH! The sweet blue taste came out. Heaven.
Thx also for your kind words about me at Poets U. Peace, Amy
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Amy-YOU are fun! I love your description-you remind me of a berry crips I made a chocolate crips topping-it was just as you described ;D I'll be by...Thank you!
Kay-Thank you! I think we all need a seashore time out, ;D I know a week near the waves would brighten my world, too!
Peggy-Thank you, I love that-paint! I hope you are still painting. It is some sea glass I put on a linen, near a window. I stuck in a piece of lavender. Sea lavender grows around my shore. I made do with what I had, lol ;D
Andy-Thank you so much :D
Susan-Your description is gorgeous!
I was all over, but the white caps on the waves-most definitely meringue, lol! ;D Thank you, so much~
Sherry-I know you know and yes, it is a longing that never goes away. I frequented the shore, every day.
I'm not home, till my feet hit the time worn wharf and water surrounds me ;D like a big hug. lol
I am glad you liked it :D
Johanna-lol, are your clouds cotton candy? It was fun to write :D Glad you are enjoying the sun~
Mary Ann-I wish I could see what you are creating! I love your art :D
Thank you, I hope you and COLOR had a grand time :D Thank you~
McGuffy Ann-Thank you! I love the pic of your cat-so cute :D
Abin-Thank you! It was an unique challenge and fun to read all the amazing poems~ :D
Ellie-I guess we share similar nicknames and the love of the big blue ocean~ I am happy for you~
I'm going to make the time and go~
Thank you :D
Margaret-Thank you and thank Chelsea for sharing her art, with us! It was fun~ :D
L.Diane-Thank you! I hate that blue is the color we associate with sadness. I love both blue n' green and B&W photos ;D
Hank-Thank you and I loved what you shared! Now, I am hungry, lol
I totally understand ;D
Grace-Thank you for the fun challenge :D I thought about naming all the blues, but I like letting others see their own blue thoughts ;D
Mary-Thank you! Yes, I would love some mysterious ladled~ You are sweet~ :D
Mixi-If I ever create a bowl such of that, I will be sure to share the recipe! Thank you so much~ :D
I enjoyed your comment
Poet Laundry-My Mom was the queen of meringue, at my house. I can see her piling them on. Hers looked like graceful swans-not mine. lol I love grandmother memories :D Thank you~
Corey-Happy to see you! I will be by...I'm finding it hard to blur the lines of art, poetry and writing-but hanging in there!
Thank you so much! Margaret's daughter did this prompt over in the garden~ I miss you! I'll visit and see what you have been up too! I'm guessing your book ;D