Sam challenged us to write about what moves and inspires us. He also offered questions-which made us think when poetry opened its door to us. It was fourth grade when my life suddenly changed. My teacher-Mrs. Moody read e.e. Cummings' poem the 'Day of Innocence'. The final bell of the day had rang and everyone scurried gathering their coats, lunch boxes and books. I was a walker and I wanted to write down the lines of the poem that had touched me. My teacher looked at me, her cloud of gray hair tilted and she smiled, "Ellen, what are you writing, the bell rang you can go home?" I shook my head no-I felt like I was in a trance.
"I know, but this poem paints spring and I want to take it home." She told me we would be reading more of his work in class and she could make me a copy. I was smitten with his insight. The fourth grade was a defining year for me. Poetry entered my world and I won an art contest painting a still life- bowl of fruit. I had to compete with my class, the fifth and six graders-and won. This was when my parents recognized I had some talent. The portal had been opened by luscious mud, a goat-footed balloonMan- and a bowl of fruit.
Thank you Sam-nature inspires me the most.
The Wedding
At night Topaz Queen mends her arch of blue
Grandmother moon perches kisses starfish
their dreams- a mirror of silver
spiders weave Queen's diamond veil
until morning dew falls
Lone eagle soars to announce the union
Topaz Queen mingles with Cloud people
kisses her Grandmother goodnight
a line dance of wings squawks n' sings
Topaz begins her walk down the aisle
event hidden by divine law
her smile like honey melts hearts
up rushing wings gather her train
wind blows the Queen's family kisses
hills decorated with purple clover wink
she holds her man's hand
caressing his velvet brown shoulders
staring into his lipid sea green eyes
his vest borrowed from a clothesline
of green fingers
Rainfall mingles n' blends her gift- perfume
of Lily of the Valley, Sandalwood n' moss
Something old, new, borrowed and blue
from the glaciers
an Aquamarine bridge marvels
Beargrass to bloom
her bouquet
Queen whispers to wind: touch him, when I can't
due to meetings with Cloud people
applause of leaves and arched trees bough n' sway
confetti cherry blossom cheer falls
Groom shakes his green mantle
they lock hands.
Witness their union's masterpiece
of crimson, mauve pink and glowing embers
of orange.
Passion dances until
indigo curtain falls
owl n' wolf clean up
stragglers
Mocking bird is reminded it's a secret
it's a secret
We celebrate with a slice of time's cake
their sacred union-a gift for all.
©Ellen Wilson
Comments
Fortunate your teacher read that poem!
Your poem is an amazing narrative with an effective use of pathetic fallacy in bringing nature to life and breath.
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
Susie-Yes, fickle Topaz loves her man, but leaves him high and dry-for days. Thank you~
Margaret-You are kind. I have tried and a few autumns, too. Thank you~
Brian-Thank you! I know your passion comes through when you teach. Mrs. Moody would like you~
Sherry-I thought of you when I typed wolf. You also love owls-yes, Mrs. Moody looked stunned. Thank you!
Elizabeth-Thank you! I do love nature and why not?! I had fun with this one. Thanks for stopping by. I have been using Medicine Cards and remembered you used Tarot and Soul cards-to inspire.
Wow-I hope you are doing well. I fully agree with you~
Renee-Thank you! I can still see her in my mind's eye. She had a fairy grin- ;D
Wanda-Thank you! Yes, it is surprising how memories can open like flowers-
Sumana-Oh, I loved your comment-beautiful~ Thank you
Hi Sue-Thank you! I enjoyed your collage-I need to make one. I use to love to gather scraps and create. And I have plenty tucked away ;D
Thank you Razzle-yours dazzled me, too.
Kerry-Thank you! Yes, Mrs. Moody was one of those teachers you don't forget. I bet you are as well~
stacy lynn mar
http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/
Stacy Lynn-Thank you so much! Mrs. Moody was a remarkable teacher and insightful, too. I will be by to visit!