I thought I would try the prompt again; I was thinking about something that happened when I wrote the first one, but I thought I would go with random thoughts in my head. Poets United prompt #49 Untitled.
You can see first attempt below(it is about an artist's personality) This is about what happened today.
pressure climbs
waiting mood shifts
name called
Is my blood work okay
why so drained, tired
I want to sleep more than before
low energy, tired, sooo tired
waiting
Hear Dr's and nurses laughing
vitals good but tired of listening
just tell me, tell me why so tired
hear files shuffled
shoes squeak on gray linoleum floor
Dr's laughter
Door opens
nerves on edge
chit chat babble
I want facts, numbers, what gives
everything looks good, except your iron
is low and your thyroid is fast
wired n' tired again
story of my life
clock spring needs to be tuned
again
You can see first attempt below(it is about an artist's personality) This is about what happened today.
pressure climbs
waiting mood shifts
name called
Is my blood work okay
why so drained, tired
I want to sleep more than before
low energy, tired, sooo tired
waiting
Hear Dr's and nurses laughing
vitals good but tired of listening
just tell me, tell me why so tired
hear files shuffled
shoes squeak on gray linoleum floor
Dr's laughter
Door opens
nerves on edge
chit chat babble
I want facts, numbers, what gives
everything looks good, except your iron
is low and your thyroid is fast
wired n' tired again
story of my life
clock spring needs to be tuned
again
Comments
i can relate to this situation:)
btw thanks for the visit:)
Lovely post I can so relate to this feeling that at times irritated you like anything.
Keep Writing. God Bless
Anna :o]
I really hope you hear good news and get some energy back, soon! I'm thankful you're not too tired to write your poetry. :)
many blessings,
Scarlett
Judith-ring true, yes! I like your words, kind of chimes along this thought process! ;-D
Ellen-Thank you; so nice of you to stop by! I love all your new treasures! You are queen of the find~
Scarlett-Thank you; I haven't been a fan of Dr's since 1987. I was stuck in a hospital for 3 weeks. The Navy couldn't decide what to do with me.
Dezzy-This does sound refreshing; I would love a piece of your cinnamon or vanilla cake ;-D
Ollie-Thank you; yes the Tired Monk would relate to this theme ;-D
Dave-Thank you; nice of you to stop by~ I enjoyed your poem, too~
Peggy-Thank you; it is a nerve wracking place~
Anna-I like that; great title "Tension of the Wait" Thank you~ @>----
inquisitive-life-Thank you; It is a necessary part of life, but difficult to endure~
Isabel-I hope it went well; I can soo relate! Thinking of you~
Manda-You are so sweet; Thank you, I'm touched~
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Tarunima-Thank you; the frustration and how slow time moves when tucked in a tiny, white room! augh~