Blue bell books blog contact me they were doing a linky based on a photo. Here is what I came up with based on this photo
Skyline's steel bridge eclipses mood
merging the canvas of day with night
the silver screen of your dreams projects filtered sleep
smoky quartz clusters rotate
blocking brilliant blue's sunny disposition
quicksilver gray shadows dance like a porpoise in an angry sea
dismantled plans gone awry
graphite smudges infuse promise of turbulent downpour
like shaken salt, let it pour
don't let ugly duckling weather discourage the swan's appearance today~
Then I went to copy n' past photo, it is of a pre tornado. I just saw a gloomy day; here is my second attempt.
India permanent black ink swirls
dances across canvas dripping into life
mood erupts, bursting like a tantrum,
tentacles unleashed; no one knows where safety lives
splintering hope and shattering dreams
alien has arrived in town, everyone wants to see, but shouldn't
fractured fragments remain
bonds are rebuilt
human nature grieves what was and what will be~
Skyline's steel bridge eclipses mood
merging the canvas of day with night
the silver screen of your dreams projects filtered sleep
smoky quartz clusters rotate
blocking brilliant blue's sunny disposition
quicksilver gray shadows dance like a porpoise in an angry sea
dismantled plans gone awry
graphite smudges infuse promise of turbulent downpour
like shaken salt, let it pour
don't let ugly duckling weather discourage the swan's appearance today~
Then I went to copy n' past photo, it is of a pre tornado. I just saw a gloomy day; here is my second attempt.
India permanent black ink swirls
dances across canvas dripping into life
mood erupts, bursting like a tantrum,
tentacles unleashed; no one knows where safety lives
splintering hope and shattering dreams
alien has arrived in town, everyone wants to see, but shouldn't
fractured fragments remain
bonds are rebuilt
human nature grieves what was and what will be~
Comments
after darkness, sunshine comes out. lovely description of cloudy/stormy sky.
Cheers.
Yvonne.
Well done. And I'll say it again. Well done.
BossyBetty-I so love your name :D Thank you~
Bryce-Thank you; if you saw the way I puzzle piece poems, you might say otherwise. Thank you so much~
Yvonne-I'll be by to see how you and Lappy are doing! Thank you~
Dezzy-You are a magician; you weren't there before! Thank you, I thought it was an interesting pic. I am changing it today for the Blue(Summer of Color) challenge. I do think I will bring it back soon; it has that serene, zen feel~
I have seen too many skies like that one; always means bad stuff a'comin'.
really you have an art of making people feel your words!
enjoyed reading!
Wonderful writing!
Lee
Tossing It Out
Kathi-lol, thank you...it sounds like a children's book in a movie. :D
Wanda-Thank you; I'll be by~
Tarunima-Thank you so much; you are kind~
Susan-I have seen strange weather, but it didn't look like the photo. Sorry to hear that... weather is so unpredictable. I like your words; Thank you~
Mindlovemisery-Thank you so much; I will come visit you~
Sherry-Thank you; yes, it should be interesting with the summer of color. Next is green~
My mum told me she wanted a baby boy when she was carrying me....lol
Don't know if it's because I'm such a daydreamer and the blue sky lets me dream of freedom there, or because I was born close to the sea and always lived near it. Love it when it's blue! I lose myself it waters constant movement and flow, be it, a river, stream or even rain fall. I've always loved blue.
Thanks you for visiting me and the lovely comment.
You write lovely words too, filled with beautiful imagery.
Thank you so much~
it was so implicitly shown in the poem...!
great work
:)
Thank you so much~
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