Poets United prompt #79 is unique. I had a little something to do with this one. Funny, I could easily write my poems ahead, but I never do. I find a photo that I think could be interpreted in various ways. I post it, on the first Thursday of the month. Earlier, I scratched down some ideas, but had to run errands, pick up my daughter from school. The house is now quiet and I'm attempting my prompt. I still didn't go in the direction that I first planned. I needed to let ideas stir and see what else might come into view. Wanna know a secret? I didn't take it on the beach. I took it on my deck table, not quite the look I wanted, but the light was good. Did I fool you? Probably not...
Life spirals in our daily rounds
tossed and turned memories churn
salty brine flows
treasures appear
parting gifts to linger in life's hands
in soul's watch
jewels sparkling in liquifying light
ribbons of cascading brilliance
open your eyes
to the chamber of one's own grace
Listen to the lullaby of life
there is still time...
Ordinary dust churns like ocean's sand
mine it like panned gold
extract the deposits
cradle your joy
filter the gifts
of living another day
only those with soft eyes
will
see
the
view
on
Earth
is
Heaven
* I wanted to add, but not in my poem. I also think the view on Earth, can be hell.
Comments
"only those with soft eyes..."
Lovely poem, Ella! Enjoyed this greatly!
A belated Happy New Year to you and yours. Have a super voyage in 2012!
mine it like panned gold..
What a golden nugget of thought! I love your photography, Ellen. This pic is stunning.
-open ones eyes to find the beauty and heaven on earth-
but yoiu are right,- for some it can be hell, also-
I wish you a beautiful week-end, dear.
Hugs,Dorthe
This is such a great reminder to appreciate the wonders of life.
"jewels sparkling in liquifying light
ribbons of cascading brilliance"
I always try to find beauty in each day. "Listen to the lullaby of life" is wonderful!
Jules @ Trying To Get Over The Rainbow
nice image, Ella! :)
" Listen to the lullaby of life
there is still time... "
(We just have to make use of it!)
Wishing you a Happy, Healthy and Prosperous New Year to Come!
Sandra Evertson
I want to do thursday think tank prompts where do i sign up??/
A great reminder of the beauty that can be all around us, as well as the hellish views!!
Happy New Year,
Eileen
'lullaby of life' is a phrase I particularly like in this poem....yep, the view can be both heaven and not..here's hoping to more heavenly views this year!!
~Scarlett
Thank You.
Lee
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Melissa-Yes, but I fear many of us don't take the time! Thank you~
Lee-Yes,our views can change! Thanks for visiting me :D
Anthony-Thank you; I so will be by!
Your Lemon Pie looks like a slice of heaven ;D
Mary-Thank you; I hope you have warmer weather now... Ours is up n' down!
Carrie-Thank you; I will be by!
I am always inspired by your blogs~
Just beautiful! :D
Scarlett-Yes, wouldn't that be nice! Thank you for always finding a line you like best~
Sherry-Thank you! I wish we all could see a softer view~ I think it varies for all of us :D
Eileen-Happy New Year to you~
Yes, we all experience both sides of this coin~
L.Diane-Thank you ;D It is so nice of you to say so~ Happy New Year to you!
Sandra-Thank you so much! Happy New Year to you n' yours~ I love your blog, so magical :D
S.E.-Thank you so much! I'll be by again :D
Kim-Wow, thank you so much~ I wrote it late and struggled. I so appreciate your kindness! @>----
Lightverse-Thank you! I know I thought about adding it, but I think it is best to leave it inspiring! :D
Mary-Thank you and you are so right! ;D
Kat-Thank you, so much! @>----
Dezzy-Thank you! It is amazing what treasures we find when we look! ;D
Jules-YOU are fun! I doubt that :D
Thank you! I need to start working on it~
rch-Thank you,you are kind! You, too :D
Alex-Yes, you are right ;D
Thank you~
Liza-Thank you so much!
Daydreamertoo-You are so right; we can't waste it~ Thank you!
Dorthe-Thank you; I hope you have been crafting again! I enjoy visiting you~ :D
Kerry-Thank you so much! I know I have missed a lot at the garden~
I'll hop over soon :E
I think its a matter of perspective - heaven or hell can be here or in a place we want it to be.
Thanks for re-posting this ~