Mary challenged at Toads to write a poem about the ordinary. Her assignment:
Think about some of the ordinary tasks, items, aspects, annoyances, joys, etc. of your life. Write about one of them.
This one came fast and furious, as I am running on little sleep and fumes of Iced coffee...weak Iced coffee...Starbucks you disappointed me today! We usually have our coffee date, Saturday morning.
Hubby said," Let's drop daughter off at school, go get coffee and hit Lowe's. I need a ladder and you wanted some dirt." I leave in a foggy disarray. He bet me I couldn't get ready in 20 minutes. He was wrong...
I get to the coffee counter and I mutter, "Help".... Their brew was watered down muck. Can't someone stir the iced brew, before they serve it. One day I must of got the end of the jug, because I thought I had drank deep, dank coffee wine. Whoa, it tasted of wet earth, coffee grounds and twigs. It tasted fine at first, till we arrived at Lowe's. It was weak, so I needed gunpowder tea when I arrived back home.(poem time). At Lowe's I was so tired, I hid with some magazines, in a gazebo they had set up. Every one smiled at me. A lot of women came over to me and said, "good idea, I'm going to go get coffee and come back and do the same."
One clerk, kept coming by and commenting, "Are you enjoying yourself ?"
I replied, "Yes, I really work here. I am causing people to notice the new display, lol." I had a cushy, green padded chair and was reading "Real Simple Magazine" I had entered the Life Lesson contest. I had to read who won the grand prize $3,000, a trip to NY, and tickets to a Broadway show. The woman, who won saw her husband die suddenly. She was thirty at the time. The story reminded me of my Dad. My Mom was thirty-nine, when my Dad died suddenly in his sleep. He had a massive coronary. It was painful to read, but well written.
I wrote about my Uncle Larry who died young, twenty-seven yrs old, with Leukemia. His wife was 8 months pregnant. He never saw his son born. The contest was to write, when you first understood the lesson of love. I was 9 yrs old and had to stay with this horrid girl and her family. My Mom and her brother were like twins. She born the last day of summer. He was born three years later, on the first day of fall. Dad n' Mom, left my brother n' I with a family of my Dad's friends. This woman bad mouthed my brother and told me I was fat, every chance she got. I remember the feeling, all too well. I also knew my Mom was desperate to see her brother. Her whole family was in New Hampshire. My Dad's family wouldn't take my brother. They were going to split us up. My brother was hyper and my grandparents couldn't manage. This girl picked on me at school. I had to stay with her, in her, newly inherited Sea Captain's home. She thought she was Queen Sheba. She slept in a full size bed, while I had the floor. Yeah, good times. I remember my Mom's face when she had to leave us and knew I had to do this for her and my Uncle.
This is what my wax paper, ground tea poem says:
Think about some of the ordinary tasks, items, aspects, annoyances, joys, etc. of your life. Write about one of them.
This one came fast and furious, as I am running on little sleep and fumes of Iced coffee...weak Iced coffee...Starbucks you disappointed me today! We usually have our coffee date, Saturday morning.
Hubby said," Let's drop daughter off at school, go get coffee and hit Lowe's. I need a ladder and you wanted some dirt." I leave in a foggy disarray. He bet me I couldn't get ready in 20 minutes. He was wrong...
I get to the coffee counter and I mutter, "Help".... Their brew was watered down muck. Can't someone stir the iced brew, before they serve it. One day I must of got the end of the jug, because I thought I had drank deep, dank coffee wine. Whoa, it tasted of wet earth, coffee grounds and twigs. It tasted fine at first, till we arrived at Lowe's. It was weak, so I needed gunpowder tea when I arrived back home.(poem time). At Lowe's I was so tired, I hid with some magazines, in a gazebo they had set up. Every one smiled at me. A lot of women came over to me and said, "good idea, I'm going to go get coffee and come back and do the same."
One clerk, kept coming by and commenting, "Are you enjoying yourself ?"
I replied, "Yes, I really work here. I am causing people to notice the new display, lol." I had a cushy, green padded chair and was reading "Real Simple Magazine" I had entered the Life Lesson contest. I had to read who won the grand prize $3,000, a trip to NY, and tickets to a Broadway show. The woman, who won saw her husband die suddenly. She was thirty at the time. The story reminded me of my Dad. My Mom was thirty-nine, when my Dad died suddenly in his sleep. He had a massive coronary. It was painful to read, but well written.
I wrote about my Uncle Larry who died young, twenty-seven yrs old, with Leukemia. His wife was 8 months pregnant. He never saw his son born. The contest was to write, when you first understood the lesson of love. I was 9 yrs old and had to stay with this horrid girl and her family. My Mom and her brother were like twins. She born the last day of summer. He was born three years later, on the first day of fall. Dad n' Mom, left my brother n' I with a family of my Dad's friends. This woman bad mouthed my brother and told me I was fat, every chance she got. I remember the feeling, all too well. I also knew my Mom was desperate to see her brother. Her whole family was in New Hampshire. My Dad's family wouldn't take my brother. They were going to split us up. My brother was hyper and my grandparents couldn't manage. This girl picked on me at school. I had to stay with her, in her, newly inherited Sea Captain's home. She thought she was Queen Sheba. She slept in a full size bed, while I had the floor. Yeah, good times. I remember my Mom's face when she had to leave us and knew I had to do this for her and my Uncle.
This is what my wax paper, ground tea poem says:
Fractured thought blocked
against
distilled dreams
boiling point
reached
tea kettle screams
cold thoughts cloud
Muse's mist
until
gunpowder green tea
balances
linear vapors
arrive
bitter moisture
contained
This poem is about returning home still in a zombie like state. I got online hoping to write and husband cranks TV so loud, I can't hear myself think. My Muse is distracted and irritated. He is on leave(vacation). How am I going to write anything? augh... I can't think! I have two prompts, an article and a story to write. I'm going to need some more gunpowder, tea that is ;D
Comments
Sorry to hear this! Anything I can do?
And did you ever tell your mom how horrid that experience was at the girl's house?
Alex-She knows! I'm good now...Thanks! I'll be by to visit you~I always love hearing what your weekend is going to be like~ I so want to go to the movies :D
Oh my goodness what a heart touching post.
Did your ever tell your Mum or did you bottle it all up?
Never fear that Ms Muse has up and left you as it isn't possible, she is always with you Ella, always. You cannot write as you do and not have her at your side.
Wishes
Lynne
Loved your post today, my dear Ella, a whole lot.
K
Lovely Ella.
I feel you on the silence...I want total silence when I write...
Thank you! I just need a lap top and better coffee and I'm be fine, ;D
He says being in the Navy, he can write no matter how much noise. I think he gets ugly and everyone runs out of his office! lol YOU are fun~
Ed-It was...give it a try! I hope you find a great cup of coffee! It is fun to people watch, too It gives you lots of ideas for writing :D Thank you~
Kim-YOU are so right! I'm going to join Tumblr so I can see your photos! :D Thank you~
Margaret-Yes, this could work ;D
My husband watches TV with one ear bud in, while he watches vids on Youtube. The TV is louder than normal... I live in the land of odd, lol
Grace-Thanks for going on the journey with me~ I'm okay, just didn't expect to relive those memories. It is like life, lots of triggers everywhere! Yes, quiet helps! I won't have it again for a week, unless I stay up till the wee hours ;D I probably will~
Dave-Thank you! :D
Tarang-Thank you! I still want to write the "Light" one ;D
rch-I can concentrate on other things, but not writing~ Nice to know I'm not alone :D Thank you!
Susie-perhaps ;D lol
Scarlett-Yes, one thing at a time~
I look forward to visiting you! :D
Thank you~
Hannah-Thank you! It was a journey I didn't plan on taking, but that is life~ Something triggers another memory...
Bren-Thank you! I think half my writing was still in sleep walking mode, lol :D
Kay-Thank you! Wish you had been there to chat with :D Actually everyone, how fun that would of been~ We would have caused a scene, lol Yes and I'll do it again, too ;D
Colleen-I hope you found some tea to inspire and soothe you! Yes, those circles of working around everyone, throws our balance off, a bit! Thanks for visiting me...
I think it is just part of the creative process~ Thank you! Yes, let's blame the planetary alignment. ;D Good one...
Lynne-My Mom knew! This woman was like a hen cackling about me, to all of her friends. My Mom didn't stand up for me. I asked her again "Why?" when I wrote this story. I was pre puberty pudgy, not fat. She couldn't answer me, but my Mom has always been timid, but not usually about her kids. This woman's daughter is now obese... funny how things turn out!
Thank you Lynne :D that means a lot!
Kerry-I love your clever comment ;D
Thank you :D
Lolamouse-Sleep walking does that, I guess! Funny, how triggers can take us back to different moments in our past~ I prefer the happy triggers :D Thank you! You should of seen this woman's reaction when I became really thin and her daughter became obese. There is a book in here, among the chaos!
I am thrilled you are going to learn the Cello~