Sam inspired us to attempt a poem in the style of (e.e. cummings). Do I dare attempt this challenge? Sure, why not...Thanks Sam, for pushing me towards the Edge!~
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gray garden's seeds
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cosmic fingerprints
wake
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change
wheel of fortune
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12,000 windows
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catch silver tears.
Comments
I love your blackberry sky and the 12 000 windows opening. This is so good!
Have a Blessed Easter, Ella.
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Luv, K
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Marian-Yes, that wheel keeps on humming. lol I like your version!
Thank you~
Renee-You amaze me! I'm excited about a collab~ Thank you-I started one need to finish it.
You are sweet-thank you so much!
Kay-Thank you! No, it didn't take as long as most of the stuff I gather and write. Maybe because I have been working on some star/moon art?! You are sweet-thank you so much~ ((hugs))
Brian-YOU rock! Answering me as ee-I love it! Oh, you should write one-see you already have begun ;D
Thank you-me being eee I had to give it a go. Ellen @ellasedge
Karin-I was thinking how many people I have walked with-who are blind to the magic of the night sky! I walk almost every evening with my head looking up towards those stars. I love blackberries, too. Where I am from-they are as big as the top part of your thumb!
Yum-thank you~
Sam I am-I love your challenge! Yes, as eee I had to try. And he was the first poet to enchant me-Thank you Sam~
Mary Ann-Thank you! I hope those babies at your home are staying warm-I'll be by-Happy Easter to you!
Happy Easter to everyone!!!!!!
Alex-Happy Easter Captain~ I hope you and the Mrs. have a lovely day. Thank you dear Ninja!
Hi Kerry-Thank you! Yes, now I am craving blackberries-lol. Yes, the sky is full with portals of mysteries-thank you so much!
enJOY your wonderful family and Happy Easter!
Hi Humbird-lol, yes those windows are the eyes that see the magic-not everyone pays attention! Thank you!
Sherry-I am craving Blackberries can you tell-lol! Thank you~
love the cosmic figerprints to awake muse...simply the most perfect take on the prompt...
Grape-Thank you! You did him proud-I love the scratch cat feverish feel of your poem~
Sumana-Thank you-I had fun! I used some of my art-still a work in progress! You are kind~
Hugs and chocolate! Happy Easter!
Spirit-You are very kind! Thank you so much~